If anyone's got the time and the inclination I'd like to hear some thoughts and criticism of the prose of this semi-dead quest I wrote a while back, when compared to Christian Cultist Quest. I've read it through out of the blue recently and am struck by how much more I like the writing in it than my current quest, but I can't really place why or what's changed.
https://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/qstarchive/2022/5291293/