>>5203492>>5203477>>5203473And that about does it. Finally. It's over. I hope the story does the character and the world some JUSTICE in how it's handled. Note, this was the first time I've tried out writing a mystery/detective story too. So lots of firsts here.
Give feedback if you like, or don't.
Thoughts on characters, highlights of the story, criticisms and tips for improvement, and general questions are all welcome here, you can grab my attention by replying to this post. You have until this vein falls off or until the start of the next vein. Although given the closeness of the next vein's approach, I won't mind seeing feedback in the next vein.
And as promised, I'll get everything compiled into a gdoc so it could be stapled onto the fan-works index over the weekend.
