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Hooves start moving once more. Dirt is kicked up, leaving behind faintly a cloud of dust which soon disperses. The city and their lights grow smaller with each passing second. The lanterns soon became candles, and then droplets of bright colors, and then fireflies, before finally swallowed into the darkness beyond my eyes’ reach. And I stopped looking back.
—Thus concludes Unwanted Children and Forgotten Ghosts—
thanks for reading! If you don’t mind, I would like to ask for feedback once again regarding the second half of this quest.
>what did you think of the pacing? Too fast / Too slow?
>what did you think of the characters? Was anyone your favorite? Did your opinion change in the second half?
>what did you think of the writing and formatting? Is the dialogue clear enough?
>what did you think of the tone overall? Were the shifts too sudden? Too dark? Too light?
