>>5993316I tried taking a red marker to this in Photoshop but all the errors are far to obvious to be worth it, and it ended with realizing far to late that I was just redrawing the whole thing.
From bottom to top;
I don't need to say anything about the feet.
Somebody forgot ankles exited.
Overall leg length is too short but lower legs are too long relative to upper legs.
The crotch is too narrow and over all to small apart form just being inaccurate.
Butt is to tight for is size, the line between the thigh and butt should be more defined
Thigh fat should extend further over the hips and close the gap between the legs more.
The small of the back should have more a curve to match the implied position of the spine.
The lumps above the thigh fat on the hips should be shorter and smaller.
As other have said the belly button should be lower and in general she should have more of a belly.
The love handles should be a little lower and not pinched like that.
The back love handles are too big for the over all perceived weight of the figure.
The boobs are uninteresting and their upper portion is too rounded to look remotely real.
The shoulder blades are an inverted lump mess.
Again there are fat deposit between the boobs and shoulder that should not be that big given the perceived weight of the figure.
Bionic man shoulder implants.
Upper arms are more or less correctly proportion (slightly on the more side) but it probably need to be toned back for the sake of poseability.
Elbow not defined.
Area between for arm and wrist appear elongated.
Nothing need to be said about the hands.
And I wont comment on the head because that gets too subjective, but c'mon there is plenty of beauty to be found in a body of this approximate weight. If is not obvious really irks me to see somebody trying to pass off a fallout mutant as a doll.