>>8142520>>8142522Maybe the snout is a bit too big? Seems a bit less muzzle-like to me in the official art; jowls are a bit pointier in the art I'd say, too, and the eyes are taller.
And how do you mean, thinner and pointier? In the art I'd say the 'ears' are deeper than you have them, kinda like rectangular slabs, or like laterally-flattened giraffe ossicones, as there's a bit of wave to them.
None of this is to say that I'm dragging on your work, I'm just trying to give as specific feedback as I can.