>>6958965The legs aren't bad, but this pose could use some work from the torso on up. Use the ab crunch and torso twist to create some contrapposto (Google this if you don't know the term). His left arm looks vague and kind of bored, it doesn't convey anything to me. He could be holding it in front of himself as if to guard from a blow, or straight out in front of him with his hand raised as if "sighting" down his arm for an enemy. His right arm just looks like he's holding it up in excitement, like "hey guys, we won the match!" I would place that arm facing backwards, like it's trailing behind him as he leaps. Or at the very least, rotate it 180 degrees on the shoulder joint (so his shoulder is facing outwards). That will create a better illusion of him raising his arm to strike. Craning his neck forward and raising his head creates an impression that he's really excited/into it. The deep ab crunch and neck joints are Revo's greatest asset, they can communicate a lot of emotion and movement. This is a small nitpick, but you can also have his tendrils all facing to the left, as if they're trailing behind him as he leaps. This creates an illusion of motion.
Sorry if that was confusing, tried to sorta show you what I mean with Kinnikuman here.