>>6546740They may get harder as they go, sorry. The first few chapters are somewhere around two-three pages in my archive, while the current ones average five. The even-numbered chapters are also going to be harder than the odd-numbered ones since they're the lewd parts, and writing decent smut can be tricky, which I imagine applies to carrying the effect in translation as well. That's part of the reason I ask for feedback so often.
Still, I appreciate your efforts. I've never had a work of mine translated before, so it's a little heartwarming even if it is smut.