>>9976016It doesn't really show up well in photos, but you can see it here
>>9970573The pupil is too far back in the eye, so at a lot of angles she just looks like she has glowing yellow orbs. I used a sharpy to make a little dot in the middle and it looks infinitely better. At picrels angle before it would either look like a glowing orb, or just have a faint blob of a pupil.
Already planning on some other adjustements too. There's a few spots where the paint seems a bit thin and some dry brushing would bring out more detail and I think she's a good candidate for teeth sharpening.
