>>5985326Oh wow, I think she's pretty cute, but agree that maybe the eyelashes should be swapped with darker ones to match the eyeliner.
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>>5985227It really makes a difference when the iris is angled more up into the eyelid in more natural looking dolls (and stylized dolls too). The guideline I like to go by is having the bottom of the iris barely touching or being maybe a little bit above the bottom lash line.