>>6090036I began writing what I felt could make it a bit better but I thought easier to just show than just say what.
Tighter crop from the sides, felt the giant white strip on the left pulled focus away from the guard/alien. Took off that tiny bit of space on the left as I felt having a bit more of the alien not in view helps with that 'fear' you would assume the guard to undergo from been chased down by said Alien.
Also just did a auto colour change. Not really changing much but I felt the change in colour temperature added to the image but was just an extra I did in photoshop, and not something I originally wrote about.
Be interested to hear what you feel about it though.
