>>8725164Ok, couple of things:
- Background is way too cluttered, which makes things confusing. For complex action shots like this, it's best to try to have a relatively clean background for a better read. Or if that's not an option, simply pull back and take a wider framed photo with more in focus at once, so it's more readable.
- The poses are a bit confusing. I can't tell what Luke is doing, but it looks like he's tryna throw it back. Or maybe he's skanking. His intent is unclear and his gaze doesn't appear to be focused on anything in particular. The raptors are done better, but I would crack the right side one's mouth open more to look like it's about to take a chomp. It looks like it's roaring, but the close proximity to Luke's leg suggests biting.
- Focus is all over the place. The only things that are crisp here are a bit of Luke's right arm and the tip of the raptor's snout, and even those aren't particularly sharp. It kind of looks like you shook a bit as you took the photo desu, it's sort of lightly blurry all over. Aside from stabilizing better, you want to pick a point to focus on and build your image around that. Typically, that should be the main character's face, since that's what peoples eyes gravitate towards first in an image. Once you have Luke's face in focus, you arrange the other elements of your scene in "layers" so you have the right things in focus and blurred out respectively.
Keep at it!
