>>27422I like your version a lot
a grown up instead of a little boy
and a female so that it will be remembered more and just imagine the porn of her
hnnnng that hair and eyebrow color and her green eyes go will with them
the diamond earrings
the cane
the haircut looks like a lowered version of keksandra which makes vip-tan not a boring old woman, it makes her have a young personality
I don't like the green "pass user sinc" in her skirt, just looks ugly, she should stay fancy
also I don't know why, but here the blueboard /vip/ in her belt doesn't look good unlike
>>27091 maybe because it's not drawn well and the word /vip/ isn't apparent very clearly
I don't like those red balls aroundd her diamnd cane though, maybe just remove them
I like her necklace and bracelet
What color is her watch? Cream? If yes then it goes well with brown of her shirt
I like her fancy long black boots
I don't know about the "hella$" tag attached to them though
Overall EXTREMELY GOOD DESIGN and thank you for showing up