Quite a few Chespin stories lately.
>>53483706I like this one. You did a good job depicting Chespin's hesitation, fear, and reactions in a believable way. It's a good contrast to Wooper's enthusiasm, too. And the fight scene was good, and the ending was funny.
But I notice you forget to put commas in your speech tags, so I'd suggest keeping an eye out for that:
>I say “About time we're out of there>I say “Sorry you had to see that.>Wooper on the other hand, proudly shouts “We're here for that treasure!”>>53490307Good followup to the last story. It's a nice depiction of our wacky everyday life in the guild, and I think you handled the other characters well.
>>53489164Pretty comfy. Nice to see Beast lighten up a bit, and the interactions/dialogue between him and Chespin are well-written. The drawings are a really cool touch, too. I like the way you draw.
>>53490517On the topic of Frisms, can they be reset or are they forever stuck with the first thing they record?
>>53490751Sitting down and trying to force myself to come up with ideas rarely works. I sometimes read other stories or listen to music to get ideas.
>>53490762Eating civilized/intelligent Pokemon is almost surely illegal, but eating ferals is probably allowed.
>>53486076By the way, I'm thinking about calling dibs on the Dragonite idea, if nobody else was planning to use it.
