>>16540790Well it's mostly silly errors I make due to writing at 2 am back then. Most of them are duplicate words or using the wrong word. For example would be "On and One"
Also some anal tendenses I've developed talking to other writers about "When did the transition from her memories back to real life ever come?" kind of thing.
>>16540842Not him but I kind of like scrawny girls like that, they're frail and cute sometimes.