>>31895918First off, thanks for taking the time to type all of that. I see what you're saying about forgetting all of those little things. If you keep reading my story, you'll see why Lillie doesn't have her Pokémon with her in a chapter that will be out in the near future. And I'm still going to have the dilemma with Sun's diary in the story, as well as some interactions between them in their room. Again, thanks for your criticism my friend.