Topic of the Thread: What scenes do you struggle the most in writing?
The scenes I struggle with most are those that incorporate perspective change. I usually write from a limited number of personalities for this reason. Trying to get better at making it fluid in my chapters; however, I will say that if I want to shift perspectives is so much easier to write a new story.
If you're a reader, what scenes turn you off from a fic (grammar aside)?
I'm adding on to what
>>28517334 had to say, since I agree with it.
Not seeing consequences that would naturally follow some action taken by one of the characters. Or an explanation by the author to embellish /why/ things did not go as expected. That really bugs me more than mere deus ex machina for sure. And those two gripes frequently go together. I'd overlook it if the story had me interested up until then.