I'll share some quick thoughts on stories I've read. These are all just my opinions, but I hope people find the feedback helpful.
"An Overelming Week" Chapter 6, by Elm-anon
>https://rentry.org/overelming6Very well-written, with good comedic scenes and cool art. I enjoyed seeing Elm's thought processes, though sometimes his thoughts dragged on too long. Still, it was neat to follow his progress.
"Today's Forecast: Sunny!" by Nido-Anon
>https://rentry.org/i5cityszI think your writing has improved overall. I feel like the protagonist possibly adapted too quickly to his new situation, and the plot and climax weren't particularly interesting--but then again, there's nothing inherently wrong with a chill story like this. I hope to see this new character again.
"Opportunity" Chapter 2, by Buizel-anon
>https://rentry.org/buizel2The plot felt sort of bland, because while some bits of info were revealed, nothing really important happened. However, I liked how you wrote the characters' personalities/interactions and the scenery. The grammar was cleaner compared to the last chapter, too.
"A Star is Reborn" by Minior-anon
>https://rentry.org/2sg48udxI enjoyed the dream sequence, and I liked Alex--more than Rocky, actually. Rocky felt like he was too slow and oblivious during the scene where they met each other, but Alex was written well. I'm curious to read more, and see how Rocky handles having such a weird body.
"A Maiden’s Quest for Love and Paper" by Swadloon-anon
>https://rentry.org/8yyxg7pcGood story. There were small grammar mistakes like missing words and changing tense, but the story was enjoyable to read, and pretty funny. I liked how you portrayed the main character. Her arrogance and quirks were fun.
