After almost a month of nothing new, I've finally gotten my rear back in gear and started a new story: "Outcast of Comb Island". Unlike my other two stories, it's not a PMD fic, but rather an ordinary Pokémon story. It's also vaguely based off some request an anon made a while ago about a Combee being pampered by its trainer, but it doesn't really follow the request too closely. It's still about a Combee and what happens when she gets caught, but ideas bred like rabbits and led me to try expanding on the initial idea.
If you want to check it out, here is a link to the prologue:
http://pastebin.com/HcA6q6BNAnd because the prologue is pretty short, here's the first chapter as well:
http://pastebin.com/SRBR6iGWAnd as usual, I appreciate any and all feedback/critiques.
