>>56486433Jesus Christ, the dialogue. The playful banter is very charming. I can go on and on about how accurate everything Anon said was, but I feel like it speaks for itself. Those lines of dialogue perfectly capture Nemona’s appeal in a way I don’t think I ever could.
>you make a point to rest your hand on her brace as you say that God, I love that detail so much. I’ve grown to appreciate her arm brace as an important aspect of her character, so it’s nice to have a bit of attention given to it.
>you don't just make me love you. you inspire me.That’s actually quite true, at least for me. She serves as at least some motivation for me going to the gym (and there was another anon in a Nemona thread months ago who felt the same way, so I guess I kind of felt inspired by that).
>sunsets can't even begin to compare to how pretty she isYou can see the sunset every day, but being able to stare into Nemona’s eyes is a privilege that only you have.
>and when she leans in, this time you're fully aware and you know it's not the alcohol talking for you>her lips really are that sweetWhat a fantastic callback to the previous story.
>>56486439>probably. nemona's been taking up more of their mind because they're in love with herCan relate. I love Penny almost as much as I love Nemona, and Arven is cool as well, but my heart belongs to Nemona. I’m sure their newfound relationship will be quite shocking to them once they finally meet up again! Either that, or they’ll be shocked it took this long.
>plot convenience Fair enough. I don’t think it should be explained. Although Paldea isn’t really an island, it seems to be connected to something (presumably Kalos, if real world geography is any indication).
Your stories are so beautiful. Nemona truly is something special. I’m very excited for what comes next!
