>>34597852I liked all of this shit except
>Pokémon that can’t reasonably fight on land unless they’re magically floating are a major problem of logic, so Game Freak has decided to not include any in “Marble”, at least for battling purposes.I hate how they lazily make fish Pokemon float in most games, but obviously the fish like Goldeen, Remoraid, Qwilfish, or Seaking could just just simply hop about, Octillery could walk like octopi do, and serpentine fish like Milotic and Huntail could inch or slither. Fish-like Pokemon seem to do fine on land for extended periods of time, so there's no reason why they couldn't be here too.
>Pokémon will no longer evolve by reaching a certain level, but by visiting certain places on the map, obtaining items or interacting with the world in more specific ways.This sounds like a stupid idea for most old Pokemon, it should be the excpetion and not the rule, doing it by leveling up is fine Changing it for specific Pokemon like Slowpoke would be fine, and it would be fine if plenty of the new Pokemon evolved like that..
Other than that your fanfiction sounds pretty good. I would buy a Switch for that.
