>>24826092Totally stealing that image for future use.
So I wound up changing up a couple titles to get some better wordplay out, and the word count kinda went in the opposite direction from what I was hoping, but...
FFN:
>https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11084689/25/FledglingsAO3:
>http://archiveofourown.org/works/3465593/chapters/12603167I might wind up migrating part of the last scene into the next chapter in some revision down the road, but eh. Even if it doesn't win any awards for conciseness, the stuff that goes down in this chapter is kinda needed for the next chapter/last of block.
That said, what sort of dark sorcery do you guys use for cramming a bunch of detail into a relatively compact number of words?
