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Finally read Sinners arc one and skimmed through arc two. For all of its flaws (including, but not limited to, the
male lead being a Gray Stu self-insert, the same male lead talking about relationships like a veteran marriage counselor at 16 years old, unsubtle references to real-world politics, morally questionable acts performed by the "good guys", "gamey" Pokemon battles where nobody uses the space around them to their advantage, ribs and bones on humans and Pokemon broken and healed and gallons of blood lost like it's nothing, the plot of the second arc diverging from the starting premise of "Pokemon but more edgy" and going in a strange direction, the characters having been chosen by destiny, and last but not least, words words words) I feel that it wasn't entirely irredeemable. There's a decent romantic adventure core to the story that zealous editor could
rescue, especially the part with our female lead, then still a Kirlia,
falling in love with the male lead Slash. If the story were licensed under
Creative Commons I'd consider trying to edit/rewrite it myself but it isn't and knowing
the author he'd probably issue a DMCA takedown against my attempt if I tried.
