>>19272733I don't know how to fix that sleeve, but it looks weird to me. I think your hair could use a lot more work, they seem too clumped up. (Also the fairytale trainer's hair should be pulled up.)
Hex Maniac's shoulders looks weird and they're not really connected to the body, even if you account for the poofy sleeves.
But I do like how you drew the folds and hands though. Nice job!