>>57638642So I'm done reading through it all.
Set-up for a sequel with a revenge plot? I can see why you kind of wanted to invoke parallels between Kiki and Liangyu. He wasn't strong enough so he'll go through an edgy training arc or something similar, right...? Now I also see why he wore a cock lock in one of those profile art works...
I was totally expecting Qiuyue to get actually ass-fucked to death. No putting up resistance? Not even dissociation or anything? I'm sticking with my original opinion, the portrayal of women here is disheartening. The part about Qiuyue's past with the previous silver fox woman was the most interesting one. Seeing what she's been through, of course she turned ruthless. Too bad the degrading porn overshadows all that since it also involves her. I hate Chuanglang I will have my Infernape pummel him to death.
Everything I've expressed earlier in regards to the writing and the porn still stands, but there's a thread of plot now and I'm still interested in it.
If I have to point out one more little thing about the translation, "oh god" sounds very out of place in this setting. Though it doesn't have to mean much, seeing how one can go "oh god" even without belonging to a monotheistic religion lol. Sorry for messy thoughts again Anon! 