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I got two review today, which is very rare, but it was also a good laugh.
>3/27/13 . chapter 1
>dude there why no lemon
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>3/27/13 . chapter 1
>This was greatly enjoyable. Not a lot of great brother/sister fics out there. Most of the ones I've found just have the brother and sister start boning immediately like it's the most natural thing in the world and don't give it a second thought and the author pretty much ignores the taboo nature of it, which completely ruins all of the romance and eroticism. You actually addressed it and had it build gradually here and had them be reluctant at first, which was great. I stopped playing/following Pokemon after the first generation so some of the references may have been lost on me but it still worked great as a stand-alone story. Bravo! I hope you write more brother/sister stories in the future.
Obviously one made me happier than the other.
