>>18732445>"Morning, guys. We should go.">We'll need to eat up well, if any of us get tired later we'll have to cut our trip short, or it might not end at all. We clear?This might be my opinion, but I can't help to think that he might be acting a bit too blunt, a trait shared for most "edgy" characters. It's justified since its a post apocalyptic world, but I think's its a bit to early for the bluntness. Maybe introduce it when something tries to intervene with the plan.
Once again, its my opinion, so take my words with a grain of salt.