>>26867904>RosaOkay. I think the story has potential, but is the only issue in the story going to be the Florges' gender? It's not a bad starting point, but it seems really superficial especially since gender is something relatively easy to determine.
If you would like my honest opinion,
and too bad, I'm going to give it to you whether you like it or not I think you've got a good premise, but the hook needs a little fleshing out. How does this particular story differ from the tried and tested trope of establishing a gender identity? For instance, do Florges have some sort of ritual that make binary genders important in some way?
>wants to tell her that he's a guy he relize that he would lose his lover. So will he keep his gender a secret? Or pretend to be a girl...forever.I just can't help but feel as though I've read this somewhere else before.
Keep at it though; you've got a lot of potential.
