>>47210596It sounds like you put too much on the plate of that single chapter and you'd probably have an easier time taking some of those points and stretching them out into different chapters, or just moving them up altogether. There might be better times to establish those points in the future than forcing them to happen now.
>>47211702Once I wrote a 30k word short story entirely based around the smut that took place in what was supposed to be the 6th chapter, answering all the details I accidentally made with things that already happened.
>>47212094What does crackship mean I forget. Can I make my vote Mawile/Ampharos anyway?
