>>55786685Sweet fucking Akatosh, how is this pdf 30mb while the entire /tog/ omnibus is only 15?!
>>55786997>Vega ReconstructedYou're right that it's a little rushed, but that's not a bad thing. Not every story needs to be eleven-thousand words, and you can build upon it later. It gave some good character development for Alex, and so I say it served its purpose.
>Also, how good or bad is the fight coordinationI think the actual fight coordination is one of the aspects you handle best, inconsequential grammar gripes aside. You do a fantastic job of using descriptions and scenery to lend a lot weight to the action, it speaks volumes about how well you can utilize your imagination. The dialogue is juvenile as all hell, but I think you already knew that and it wasn't the point anyway.
Just breathe, anon-kun. Far less talented people have published far more without a fraction of the forethought. Trust that you're doing the right thing and believe. You can do this.
