>>21139178Plot-wise it's interesting at least, having a boy wake up as a pokemon in modern world hasn't been made popular enough, or was never used. Whichever one works. I do think that the MC recovered a bit too quickly from that gunshot wound though, so consider having it linger on for a bit.
Grammar-wise...it needs works. Lots and lots of work.
You seem to switch from no-tab paragraph to regular paragraph format. I would recommend choosing one style and sticking with it.
Make sure that "I/i" is always capitalized if it is alone.
Major capitals are missing at the start of some sentences.
Sentence stuff: You could go into more detail about being an absol a bit more for line 3 description.
The last sentence in line 4 could be split into two, and I don't remember if blood has a metal-like taste to it. Maybe?
I thin more interrogation can be done in line 13, with the grandmother trying to figure out where her son is.
