>>13641318oh you're very welcome. I'm glad to be able to help you with criticism. Hopefully it's constructive enough for you.
Oh and a little something else I had to make because
my hormones told me to and because Serena is best pokegirl. So ignore me if it doesn't interest you.
>slightlymorepervertedsuggestions.jpg
>Serena's right side of her neck would actually poke out a little bit inside her, so ensure that it shows
>That little frill of hair on her head is facing in an odd direction. Ensure it looks flatter so it doesn't "stick out" from her forehead.
>Humans' lower backs have smalls on them, which would indent Serena's panties and make them dip down a little bit in the middle lattitude of her butt
>Despite what one might think, I've found that artists I know prefer to draw larger breasts because they 1. are aesthetically pleasing 2. have a more defined shape and so are easier to draw for many and 3. through sex appeal, simply grab more attention from the viewer (and your audience is 4chan, they don't mind) So I humbly, pervertedly request that you enhance Serena's bust. Not neccessarily to the point of my suggestion if you don't want to, but just a bit more.
Ignore the last one if that's not what you're looking for; I just needed to let my desires vent a little bit. 