>>18343317They bumbled it cause Ash went hurr durr I'm a faggot no I don't remember OH NO WHY CANT I WIN WHATEVER WILL I DOOOOOO, without actually showing him having a 'revelation' moment, or Serena making him remember with special words when he needed it most. Not even a denial followed by quieting down while he suddenly remembers what he said to her long ago. No even suddenly accepting what she had said when times got really rough Exposition was bad basically.
I donno how to describe it, but that's how it felt.
If I had the chance to rewrite it I would have.
>>18343263Wait, what the fuck? There's a fireworks scene? AND NOTHING HAPPENS?!?!!?
>>18343263>>18343367Is Citron some kind of wannabe French aristocrat?
