>>43371103Both, comparing her to the rest of my cast and the generic “strong trainer” archetype.
>>43371611I have fleshed out her flaws more. Tldr she’s part of a large and successful family and places large expectation on herself because of it, to the point she’ll dismiss what she’s already accomplished if she’s not making fast, quantifiable progress. Her unhealthy work ethic causes her stress she’s unwilling to deal with.
On the topic of
>>43370665 I just With they’d call back to and flesh out the lore they already have. Remember Azoth, Infinity energy, or alternate universes/ultra space? Too bad, Here’s dogs and an alien we’re never exploring further. If given the opportunity, I’d love to sperg about my region and shit.
>>43372108>>43372652Please post more often, I really like your stuff.
>>43371351>”in someone were in danger, it’d be ok because they’d just become a ghost”. That’s morbidly hilarious. I agree that you could roll with what
>>4337119 said and there’s potential for humor with her being social ill-adjusted with unintentionaly dark humor.
>>43374371Not a bad team. Clauncher is based.
>>43375816Sorry man, I don’t have good advice but I hope you feel better. Your arts good though, and it’s good you still can make stuff. I hope you get your creative wheels going again soon.
