>>54766714Kino story! Glad to read about Tropius again, and it's interesting how you further developed the sunlight's effects on him.
I think what I loved the most about this story is the guild characters Tropius meets! The part with KFC was great, it's funny how he has become the tutorial character for guild members lmao. If it was a game, KFC would definitely be the NPC you go see to explain the controls. But it fits his character well, he's the go-to pokémon for aura lore and he likes helping humons.
I wonder if Tropius knows KFC is native? I don't think he ever mentioned it!
His interaction with team cozy was fun to read too
>Do you know who sneed is? Chespin won't tell me!
>Get that sun, and stay away from chillersfucking kek
A part that made me sad was
when he went to town. In almost every story, everytime a character goes to town, it's often described full of wonder and the characters have fun. But Tropius could not enjoy it because he's too much of a big guy :(. The story was told from his perspectice while he lacked sun, so maybe it's not as hopeless as it seems? I'm sure the cafe wouldn't mind having a polite big mon squeeze inside, or poke his head in for a hot chocolate! I hope...Regardless, the story ended well and the last line made me quite happy
As I do so, I feel the two bananas on my chin as well as a small, third nub. A smile washes over my face as I drift outcuteee
