>>23391786>garbodor fic>It was in heat. A male of its species,Why do people do this? Do you actually think that's how it works? I don't even think FEMALE Garbodor would go into heat, since they don't exactly seem particularly mammalian. What a tired old cop-out of an excuse plot, and you couldn't even be further from a correct application of it. That's the most disgusting thing in this fic.
Oh, and another thing is the contrast in language. You can't switch between big fancy words most people wouldn't know off the top of their head to such crude words like 'tits,' there's an amazing disconnect in the style there.
>resembling the sexual dimorphism of a human maleLike for real, what the fuck? I know what that means, but why would you be so roundabout in its description? Is someone paying you to write this, by the word? What are you trying to accomplish by writing like this (and then just straight up saying 'cock' a few times afterward?)
It reeks of more than just Garbodor. It reeks of poor style choices, shameful inconsistency and, at the end of the day, being a hastily-written fetish kinkfill. 0/10, not worth your time or mine.
