>>12227345Yes that shading on the wings is almost perfect, also, on the white bits on the eyes, get your eraser on a low setting and go around it so it looks like my pic, its how sugimori does it, idk why but it works
and another thing, on bits that look like they would be really shiny, put a pure white dot or line where it would hit and do the same thing to it like with the eyes, also in terms of highlights, put some on the head, i know it wont show up on the white but it will on the red and it will improve the look of it massively
