I drew Team Petal-Purr and Booker hanging out together. I like this team, and I think Booker and Sneasel would get along pretty well with them.
I also read Petal-Purr's Summer Festival story (
https://rentry.org/PetalpurrFestivalMain), so I'll share my thoughts. You always do a great job writing your characters. They're distinct and play off each other well, and their behavior and actions are authentic and believable. In this story, I like how you portrayed the look and vibes of the town and festival, as well as the team's excitement. It really conveyed the idea that reaching Capim and attending the festival is a huge deal for them. I also enjoyed the cute/comfy/slice-of-life scenes, and the artwork. I look forward to reading Heidi's part when it gets added (she's my favorite of the trio).
I don't have much criticism. There were some small grammar mistakes, but they were all pretty minor. The fact that the characters
each had some negative experiences at the festival possibly could've been explored a bit more, and while I liked the climax overall, the way the trio shifted from being
upset at the fireworks to being cheery again may have been a bit too abrupt. But maybe that's just me. Regardless, I really enjoyed the story! Nice work.
>>56553700Thanks for reading! As for the ice, I know a gap will widen if water gets inside and freezes, but my idea here was that this ice forms a layer on the outside that basically bandages the two sides together. I admit that may not be realistic though, so I appreciate you pointing it out.
>>56552933kek
>>56550865That is horrific, but it does look rather cool. You really captured the frightening, deranged vibes of the original painting.
>>56554143Oh, I'm sad now... Very bittersweet. Good work with the character's expressions and poses, and the perspective on the fallen Rain (RIP).
