>>56982753Oh, and that's a misspelling of "Zoroark" and a use of the word "managed" back to back. I'll edit that out later.
Anyways, there's several examples like this throughout your writing where you just seemingly forgot or didn't care to integrate the images more seamlessly into the writing, leading to several pages' worth of deadweight loss. I'm not trying to be critical here, but this gives the impression that you're not a very good editor. Just fixing this one issue alone would make your writing easier to follow, as you'd no longer have quantifiable gaps in your writing. I'm aware that it can come across as arrogant to directly compare writing in this way, but you seem genuinely unaware that this is even an option available to you. Also, I find it funny how you blame zoomer attention spans on this when I'm the only zoomer here.
