>>58299219Take your time. I sure as fuck did.
>>58299498Speaking as the guy that criticised you here
>>58275095 , as well as the guy that criticised Tinkanon, original writefag is absolutely correct. Just because I felt your 5th post needed some work doesn't mean your story wasn't valuable. The perspective was unique and yours was the first to include an actual villain - I absolutely wanted to see more. If I seemed harsh, it was for two reasons. 1, I wanted to see your concept live up to its potential and 2, I'm a firm believer in improvement through criticizm, so when I saw a post I felt I could comment substantively on, I took it. Frankly I wish people would burn my writing with a magnifying glass so I can improve, but getting anyone to do that is invariably like pulling teeth.
>>58299440>>58299454Your compliments are appreciated as always, sir. Even with protag injured, mama Aggron is still quad weak to fighting, so he still ought to be able to end this fairly simply by just shoving a couple of aura spheres up her ass. The bigger problem is that regular beatdowns from protag clearly aren't a permanent solution to this problem. He might have to negotiate with the city for a supply of fresh steel or something. That means talking to and being surrounded by people. Oh dear.
Maybe he really does need to form the PokeAvengers after all. Having a support network ight help him stay in control when things get hard. A problem shared is a problem halved and all that.
>>58299567I was going to suggest she might not be a former human after all, but I like this interpretation better. With the level of entitlement you'd need to think earing active railway lines was okay, you just know this woman was one of those Karen haircut types.
