>>58537000>Its kinda funny how Kartanon isn't sure that the shonen thoughts are a result of Kartanon transformation, or if its just amplifying their own weebness.There's a lotta things I wanna go into with Kartanon tying to that aspect that I'd love rambling about but it's probably better letting the story reach that point rather than spoil it. I'm at a slight crossroads internally since a part of me does genuinely want to have some more "big" setpieces and action going on, but what I established from the start was an idea of someone who got a not-great pokemon to turn into, but still does genuinely have stuff in his life to make that situation "easy", just... someone who got relatively lucky all in all. My writing tends to be spur-of-the-moment so I think I'm finding out the story at the same time as anyone else reading it is admittedly, even if there are a couple things I do have planned...
>>58538460I slightly worry I might've overexerted my creative muscles these last few days since the 2 posts I did write earlier felt like they had a bumpier road to being put to text than the previous updates had, but that could just be the storybeat they were built around...
>>58538569Will say, I kinda didn't notice updates on Val's story since I was mostly checking the OP rentry links to see if any story'd been touched, at least until I realized you were tossing 'em in catbox earlier, very solid stuff so far! Definitely agree on the Ninetales being a solid "meant to be hated" character, y'did good!
