>>57483797Heh.
>>57483817It's funny how it suddenly all clicked into place after that. I'm honored.
>wrong vibesBut not by much. Put a little sway in her pose. Give her some more confidence. It's definitely not a perfect comparison, but look at the body language in these two different interpretations of Cloud and what those interpretations suggest. Right now, your sketch is firmly on the right, but with a few minor tweaks you can make her look more in control. Raise her right fist up to a V instead of an _| and turn that left arm into a > and not an I and watch as she suddenly becomes much sexier.