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I'm writing something in the Unova region, something a good bit more serious than I usually write. Its got its own thing, with my character trying to get the Lunar Wing to save somebody, but the only logical thing to do for the story is have N hold the Lunar Wing in order to incentivise conflict with him, but I'm worried that it may detract from what N and Team Plasma are supposed to be.
And that's not even mentioning tonal pacing: the race against time to save somebody's life leaves my character very serious. it's great, I can tell! but I'm worried that longer swathes of this series may leave readers emotionally tired, or in dire need of something to break the pace up.
I'm not sure what to specifically ask for; I'm just worried sick that I've been making something bad, and I can't help but ask. I've crafted some justifications for some characters and their actions, but I worry that those justifications are too shallow or even come across as forced...
Golly, I feel like vomit in a car...
