>>32794326Wow—can this post be any more wrong?
>Dye and make-up have existed with us for thousands of years. Make all the Pokemon Technicolor.No comment.
>Every team , including the Main Character's, should have a theme. You don't have to tell us what that theme is, it just has to be there.Why, though? To what benefit to the story is there in doing so?
>It's fine to tell and not show. If you think you're taking too long to show something minor, you probably are.I hope writing is just a hobby for you.
>Skip to an exciting part. THE Battle, the soap opera betrayal, where they fall into a well Just because Star Wars did it, doesn't mean you have to rip it off. A slow open is much easier to write for.
>Answer to inevitable question about "I don't know what to write about!"The MC's home has burned down. They need to spend a week in the woods with their Pokemon.
But that's not a story, just an inciting incident.
>After a week of camping to get away from their internet addiction, the MAC comes back to society and has to give the Pokemon a bath. How does he react when they don't want one, are on fire, are intangible, are mental projections, squeak and emote in ways that make everyone uncomfortable.Someone should trace this man's I.P., and then call an ambulance, because I think he's had a brain stroke.
