>>54773364Very nice. Greentexts are basically short-form fiction, and it seems you understand that with how the writing feels sharp and to the point. Writing that much in 4k characters without it feeling rushed takes a bit of finesse.
It's great how you show don't tell with the sex. You just give the reader a few great hints at what's happening. I really like this line:
>And the distance she’d have kept during the day would seem like a front with how tactile she’d be. Hands on your chest, arms wrapped around your nape, her hips swiveling on your crotch, and that’s all before you even got your clothes off.It really gets the mind going.
It's also both sexual and sensual and cute. The initial premise (stay away from Rika because [Fanfic]) isn't amazingly done but I can see you were strapped for words. Also OL cougars are great and you're very based for writing it.
9/10 Make more.
>>54773406The loathsome adult human woman fetishizer. How horrible.
