>>40310403The only thing "fetish fuel" about her is her large breasts, which I'm surprised is such a problem considering how many anons waifu characters such as Cynthia or Wicke.
>>40310517>>40310803I could see what I can do about writing excerpts in the future. She has received adjustments to her character over the course of her development, but her hair color stays. Given the variety of designs Pokemon has alone, her hairstyle and color fit right in among the crowd.
If anyone else has any additional critiques or criticisms, feel free to deliver them. Or continue discussing your OCs and how to get them depicted the best they can be! I imagine this edition of the thread is nearing its closing anyway.
