>>53491095>But I notice you forget to put commas in your speech tagsI knew there was some kind of minor grammar error I was making. Commas are weird and I guess I was trying to avoid having too many of them.
Glad you like the fight scene, it's the first time I've really written one. One thing I worry about is
Wooper being a bit too competent. Maybe he just seems stronger than he really is alongside Chespin's total lack of experience?>On the topic of Frisms, can they be reset or are they forever stuck with the first thing they record?From what I recall the Gates gang gets a few of them and they get used a few times, so I don't see why they wouldn't be able to.
Now it's back to brainstorming, I like writing stories for Chespin.
