>>53892633And regarding Dewott:
he seems like a neat villain. Seems like he honestly cares about Toge, but is a jerk to everyone else. Interesting how he’s straight-up bloodthirsty and murderous too. I also like the idea of an outlaw Dewott now roaming around as a constant threat in the background. I know Toge said Dewott would probably leave guild members alone, since he only wants to convince Toge to rejoin him, and he doesn’t have a beef with the guild. But I can also see him developing a grudge against the guild for “keeping Toge away from him”, so to speak, and so he becomes a random encounter miniboss that unexpectedly attacks guild members on missions. “Punished Dewott, a humon denied his best friend.”By the way, why doesn’t Dewott use his own human name? Everyone just calls him Dewott. Seems like he would prefer using his human name considering he’s not really a fan of Pokemon.
Anyway, sorry for making such a long post. Great job on the story!
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>>53890653Yes, please add him to the minor character chart. I think the chart hasn’t been updated since the day it was made. It would be neat to see it get more filled out. I have a character or two I still need to add there, come to think of it.
>>53891575>I ended up toning it down a lot from my original idea.Oh boy, now I’m curious how violent it was in the original version.
>>53875067>>53889789I love posts like these, so wholesome.
>>53888811>>53888814>>53890789Y’know, maybe graduating from the guild wasn’t such a good idea...
>>53891941>>53892322It’s fun, yeah, but it also gives me FOMO because I can't always be in the chat.
>>53892125I did write that, but it was mainly a quick fix to a logical problem I ran into while writing my story, so I didn’t fully consider the implications. I hope that doesn’t cause problems later.
