>>20481003Eh, I disagree. As both a writer and avid reader, I believe you shouldn't shame "said/says", but it's best to vary whenever possible, as it really doe make the entire thing mundane. As the other anon says, spice it up a little. You can still make things interesting without taking out 'says'.
>Her lips curled into a sultry grin, as her fingers gradually inched towards his, eventually lacing around them tightly. A reassuring confidence brimmed about her as she says in a seductively hushed tone, "1v1 me fggot."You just need to be descriptive and have fun with it. You don't need a paragraph to describe it either, just be sure to explain what the hell is going on.
>He puffs, crossing his arms out of miffed agitation and disbelief. "Fine." He says, his voice strained with indignant disappointment.So in conclusion, yes it's not a bad thing, but it's better to not ignore the importance of how the line is delivered in most cases.
