>>43730161ok im not the best at doing redline stuff but basically you want the face anf the helmet to follow the same perspective lines as the rest of the body so they can gain volume and look like separate objects
in the original drawing korrina's helmet is merging to much with the helmet, the helmet should pop out more simply because it is on top of korrina's head, i didn't want to go more indepth with the body because i realize it is a lewd pic so it doesn't need to be on model and it seems to follow perspective allright so even in my red line i pushed perspective as far as it seemed realistically possible to to give the drawing the benefit of the doubt
i think you'll get my poit if you look at the angle the triangle thingies on korrinas helmet should be