>>18337400Ehhhh, there's something off with the head. I think the eye is too thick vertically? And maybe something with the jaw.
Regardless, I'll always strongly dislike that pose. It's really really nice artwork, but he line of motion is extremely messed up. This one has good proportions and a solid line of motion, although the tail doesn't quite match up behind the wing, which is the only issue. And it's a bit more intimidating.
